Death of England - The Women

“So welcome to the world of Black, Carly!”

Denise

Sharon Duncan-Brewster as Denise, Erin Doherty as Carly. (Photo: Helen Murray)

Closing Time is the third in the trilogy Death of England which features Delroy’s mother Denise (Sharon Duncan-Brewster) and Michael’s sister Carly (Erin Doherty) who also happens to be the mother of Delroy’s child. In this episode they work adjacent to each other in the same premises.  Erin runs the Florists inherited from her father and Denise has a Restaurant producing food from the Caribbean.

They wear aprons, one printed Fletcher and Tomlin, the other Tomlin and Fletcher.  Their lease has come to an end and they are about to be visited by the landlord’s representative to take over the premises.  The women speculate on what will replace their businesses.  “Not another bleedin’ Gails!” says Carly reflecting the gentrification of the area with an expensive designer bakery.  

There is little love lost between these two women. Denise is unhappy that her precious son, good natured Delroy has fallen for the daughter of the racist Mr Fletcher.  Carly is in competition with her mother-in-sin. 

This play is a dualogue whereas Michael and Delroy were monologues.  Both women are angry and rant fiercely at each other at a speed which meant there were occasions I couldn’t catch every word let alone have time to digest the point they were making.

Sharon Duncan-Brewster as Denise (Photo: Helen Murray)

The performances are remarkable for each woman to retain their lines and deliver them with no pause for thought. Carly is listening to the football match on the radio where Leyton Orient is playing and which Delroy and, I think, Michael are attending.

After an hour of disputatious quarrelling, Carly and Denise reach an uneasy truce.  Denise will explain what Woke means to Black women who invented the term to describe the daily prejudice and disadvantages they face because of the colour of their skin. Denise will listen to Carly’s description of the racism she has faced when seen with Delroy and acknowledge her experience of a comparatively small amount of prejudice.

This third part was for me the least satisfactory. The conflict between the women seemed to me to be something that they would both have worked out when Carly’s daughter and Denise’s granddaughter was born, or else there would have been a permanent rift, which would have presented a real conflict for Delroy to choose between his mother and his partner and child.  I was also uncomfortable with how the jealousy and rivalry was expressed with the writers not quite achieving women’s voices.  Denise talked about being jealous of Delroy’s affection for his football club. I couldn’t recognise the charm or beauty with which Denise, being compared to Nefertiti, had captivated Michael or the humour, just the anger.  Both women appeared too hard. 

Closing Time feels more of an add on than an integral part of Death of England.  ULTZ’s set of the St George Cross too seemed to mean less in this female context. Don’t miss Delroy! 

Erin Doherty as Carly. (Photo: Helen Murray)

Production Notes

Death of England – Closing Time

Written by Clint Dyer and Roy Williams

Directed by Clint Dyer

Cast

Starring:

Erin Doherty

Sharon Duncan-Brewster

Creatives

Director: Clint Dyer

Designer: ULTZ ., Sadeysa Greenaway-Bailey

Composer:  Tayo Akinbode

Movement Design: Anjali Mehra

Lighting Designer: Jackie Shemesh

Sound Designer: Benjamin Grant,
 
 
Pete Malkin
 
 

Information

Running Time: One hour 40 minutes without an interval

Booking to 28th September 2024

 

Theatre:  

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Reviewed by Lizzie Loveridge

@sohoplace on 28th August  2024